Tuesday 13 December 2011

The Edge Rough Cut, Second Draft



This is my second cut of the trailer. It is very different from my first cut. The order of the scenes are different and the choice of shot types are also different, so that the storyline is clearer. Title cards have also been introduced to make the story moer interesting and clearer, with a narrative. However the music is still not fitting to the edits and the dialogue still needs to be louder.

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